Lurking in the shadows,
Alert to my prey
Zealouly searching for
Any who stray. . .
Reaching clawed hands
Up to your throat
Strangling your screams as you choke. . .
Magus in the dark, yet
Ever in the light
Raging at the eternal
Lingering of the night
Infernal combustion drives me,
Never am I still.
Until I see the end of days,
Sleep I never will.
Author notes
as I hope is obvious, I chose the acrostic with my name. . .I'm not really that vicious. . .except by request. . .heh, heh, heh. . .
A contest entry
- ღMuffled Screams&Stolen Innocenceღ ||pt.2|| by XXBrunettexBarbieXX.
450 points, ended June 20, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice words . . .
You use yore tongue purtier'n a . . . wait I did that one already . . .
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boosh-a-moosh
creepy crawlies yet again... lovely
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Heya hunnie! This was an awesome write! You are the first who entered an acrostic poem up to date and i love it. You created a lovely and magnificent poem using your author's name. Your words were strong, powerful and flowed really well..I also liked the words that you choose to use. This was a powerful write and i really enjoyed reading this. Keep writting your talented. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
xoxoxox
~Chrissy~ -
Not truly you, but very much SO of your writing style. I love it! you did well with the acrostic, and good luck in the contest.
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