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Passionate Dance

The candle light flickers
Reflecting the color of your eyes.
As you dance before me
In rhythmic steps
The softness of your skin
Exposed in sultry shadows.

You flash the sheer silk
Of your negligee
In boundless waves
Through the still night air
Your pleasing shape
Teasingly revealed.

How can I resist your
Tempting seduction
Of red succulent lips
Parted in a mischievous grin
Luring me to hold you
In a lover’s grasp.

Your slender legs
Longing for my touch.
To fulfill your desires
In a playful fantasy
The sway of your body
Invites lustful intentions

My body trembles
With heated sweat
Of visual foreplay
That secretes throughout
With rigid formation
Of a wet passionate kiss 
 
The lure of your body
Pierces my soul
Drives me to the brink
Of a tender caress 
Smelling the bloom
Of your flowering bud.

Floating to the beat
Of pounding hearts
You fall into my arms
Willing awaiting strokes
Of carefully placed hands
Take me in this passionate dance.
 



   

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  • Scandalous Beauty
    June 9, 2007

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    HOTTTTTT! Charley, I love it. I found it very arousing and your details were amazing. You sexy boy!!!!

    I love ya,
    Guin


    • ckwriter69
      June 9, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting Guin, always good to hear from you.
      Love ya,
      Charley

  • hiddenpoet19
    May 30, 2007

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    this is an absolute amazing piece of writing. it makes me wish for a boyfriend or a husband that looks at me like that.


    • ckwriter69
      May 30, 2007
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      Thank you HiddenPoet18 for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      Love Ya,
      CK


  • HaleyMary
    May 30, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Lots of passion and emotion in this piece. Beautiful imagery, too. I love the title of this piece. Keep up the great writes.


    • ckwriter69
      May 30, 2007
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      Thank you Haley for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.
      Much love to you,
      CK

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