Mired through all those promises
touched in ways never imagined,
Held in hope that still lingers,
Held in a warm embrace
that seems nonexistent,
Heart to heart,
Eyes to eyes,
Body to body,
That unites as one soul
within that miracle that we all hold
celebrated in time,
Can you hear the melody?
Will this melody last forever?
Or will it slowly fade out
like true love that is lost?
May 4, 1999
By: B.E. Whitehorn & Christina M. Schultz
Author notes
Written January 9th, 2002
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
This is simply beautiful.
I love this image you have used to compliment here.
Liz -
You have such a wonderful and beautiful way of expressing love through your words and the last question of this poem I think every one can relate to. There is always that in the back of our minds wondering if it will last.
-
Wow this is really beautiful it flowed really well.. I'm going to go read some more of your piles of excellent poetry..
Blessed Be,
Shadow -
excellent
Wonderful song & poetry!!! I enjoyed it and felt every word. Thanks for sharing it. -
neutral
I really liked it and if flowed very nicely...good job! -
Thank you for the kind words Tayloka !
-
Yes, very nice. A philospher's questioning through hand of Poets.
-
Thank you Pat !
-
Lovely, the flow of it made even more surprising
after viewing the 'credits'. Two people speaking
and writing as one. Nicely, nicely done.
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
1 old applause
