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[ He died too soon ]

He died too soon
for me really to get to know
but I loved him
I miss you Daddy
I wish you could come back to me
your family
I still love you
I know that he loved me to
Gave me the name Fatima
Daddys favorite daughter
thats what my name means
something so special
something so rare
I realize Im just like him
a reflection of a man that made me
my bad eyes
I got it from my Daddy
I woudnt change wearing glasses for the world
my dad im just like him
I get told by people that knew him
better than me
I wish the man that made me
could see how daddys little girl doing
im all grown up
but for him
I'll always be daddys girl
I didnt really have a chance to know my Dad
died to soon
I knew that he loved music
wrote it to
5 years old now Daddy's gone
Ill neva forget him
I am a reflection of you
the man that made me
I love you Daddy
I miss you Daddy
and I'll neva stop

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Uncle Bud
Well this is a poem I already had but for this contest I changed a few wording and added some new words thank you hope you like

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 11, 2007
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    Very heart felt and filled with pure honest emotions very good


  • badddgirl
    May 30, 2007
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    This is so sad, wow, thanks for sharing, I am sorry about your loss