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Teddy Bear

Teddy                      Always
Bear                        Sweet
Aged with time, hugs
Loving eyes so concerned
You love me as much as I you

Brown fur    worn   with time
Remnants of when I was a child
Fat little cheeks     funny little nose
Forever friend  X X X  never too old
To hold you and seek comfort
♦@@
Stuffing matted and old
An ancient tattered brown bear with missing fur
The many dried tears of my childhood stained you
Yet never a complaint from you
Loving arms always opened wide
Waiting for me in my misery
Sharing my heartaches and pain
How many days through my life
has your presence comforted me
I cannot even begin to count them
Because of you                I never fear,
always there                    to turn to,
my  sweet                       teddy  bear

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"Candy Apple"

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  • ronnica
    December 7, 2007

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    Rather special these teddy bears, sitting on our bed with all of our childhood memories. I enjoyed reading
    your reflections and your gorgeous creation of him.
    thank you.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    Delightful in form, with a meaningful message, very nice. I did find the background a bit distracting but that's just me. Well done dear poet!

    Dennis


  • sweetdancer
    October 12, 2007
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    very nice i like tedy bears too!good luck

  • Morrigan Trinity
    June 10, 2007

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    This is so sweet. And how many of us really wanted to give up our old, ratty teddy bears anyways? I know I didn't. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • intanglio2ring
    June 5, 2007

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    Lovely!

    A wonderful tribute to our Beary nice friend!
    A great job with the shape too!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


    • DawnBaby gold member
      June 5, 2007
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      You are a Teddy Bear!

      Cute, this is a true story, although like I said, mine looks a bit different. This stuff must take a long time to master, Teddy's deserve a tribute! Always there, thank you for your kind comments and applause, Teddy thanks you too!

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    May 29, 2007

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    Now how did I know you'd do such a great job with this one?? lol Its very clever and I enjoyed it a lot Love, C


    • DawnBaby gold member
      May 29, 2007
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      Thank you

      Remember, I am reclaiming my child! LOL
      I had to give credit to my teddy bear, sure doesn't look much like this guy either.
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