I gave you my heart.
You ripped it apart.
I loved you more than life.
Took everything you threw.
I dodged a few, hit by most.
Yes, I love you.
Love you baby.
Come and take me away.
Love me honey.
Take me back..
You took my heart.
As I picked up the pieces.
You said you loved me.
Tossed my heart around like a rag doll.
Yes, I love you.
Love you baby.
Come and take me away.
Love honey.
Take me back.
I’m sorry.
A contest entry
- Society, love, philosophy, music, emotion, etc... by CrazyRebel.
456 points, ended July 1, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heartbreak to the extreme by Leech Lover.
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Comments
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I have to agree with you. Heartbreak can be a bitch. Very good writing, though.
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Nice work. Painful yet enjoy going through it.
I am not a GOD HATER. But my work GOD was just a thing
spilling out through my creative mind.
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