Where do we stand when it comes
life or death and inbetween
Fragile as glasses our bodys cant bend
Is god here to help or drive us insane?
The sun sets and he walks away
How do you know if your worthy of the gates?
Shinning so bright like a suicidals love to cut
As bright as a fire that cant be put out
G
o
D
Or the
D
E
V
I
L
Who to follow?
/ G
/ O
d } D
o { I
o } S
g { g
e } O
h { o
t } d
TO
I long to be accepted but by which force?
Im torn between what is right and what I'm said to be
I'm a believer of god, but are his thoughts right
I'm rumored to be a worshipper of the demons around
I want to know opinions that kill
I want to hear all there is to tell
Author notes
Umm none... what is there to say? Its only my second free verse and the first time i've created a shape haha
enjoy...
I AM A RAMBLING GIRL
A contest entry
- Ramble On, My Friend! by zhaniswolf.
375 points, ended June 4, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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THANK YOU!!! YAY!
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oops i didn't look. reread the rules real quick. pay attention to the capital letters.
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aww i was disappointed in the tone you gave me in a message. i believe.. it was like ehm...
dawnoflove you r on my friends list and that makes me sad
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lol. i read your comment. to be honest, i thought you were going for the eye of God because of the line in the middle. the shape is fine; don't worry yourself about it too much. i asked for rambling; not perfection. It's okay. You did fine. Good luck in my contest.
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BROKENPEACE
Really it pisses me off I worked on the shape of a diamond and had it perfect till i submitted it and now that i have i keep trying to edit it and its not fixing it....so hopefully that is clear enough that you can read it.. if not let me know... -
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ahem. capital letters in contest description. please do that now.
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