I feel you laying beside me
touching my belly like your mine to be
u kiss my shoulder i smile so happy
we lay together intertwined
nothing in our mind
i feel the passion when u make me whine
u light my body up like a fire
rolling around almost like a tire
again my body lite on fire
i feel u with every thrust
our love is built on passion & trust
we have so much love & so much lust
i hope we can stay together forever
just laying here intertwined together
our hearts link together when will they come apart..
i hope NEVER
A contest entry
- Entrapment by babi.
800 points, ended June 11, 2007, 26 entries
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Comments
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awww that's so lovely. A perfect imagery of love and passion, there is no other feeling like it, and i love the take of entrapment that you have used, like you're willingly trapped in this moment. The few moments after you make love are precious, they are true and feelings flow from the heart. This was very refreshing to read, beautiful. You have painted a very clear picture and it's alomst as if i am feeling the emotions, feeling the love. The rhythm is smooth and flows, this poem is very easy to read. Thank you for your entry and good luck in he contest babi xxx
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