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The Art of Seduction

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The magic of seduction, is not to let it known
Heavy on the romantics, a subtle passion shown
Evading the heart with fantasy’s unknown

Attacking all the senses, that once layed abandoned and alone
Racing of the heart, by the way his lips rest upon mine
Teasing his exterior, with a gentle brush by mankind

On a painted canvas, his form I outline
Feathering so delicately, passion is entwined

Seeking every detail, my hands can find
Erasing the trials of the day, I hold the time
Dancing colors, blending in such rythmns
Underlining images, to a heart that listens
Carefully placing, the hands upon the finish
Tastefully teasing, with tender kisses
I wrap my hands, around the picture designed
Offering him a love, created by passions mind
Natural touches, teasing him, as the day unwinds

Flirting, my hand taps his,
Hands become united, as my eyes brush his lips.
I seek his soul, through the light of his eyes,
He reads me quickly, as moments slip by.
He brushes the hair, that fell in ringlets around my face,
Speaking to me sweetly, my heart began to race.
My lips began to move, but they made no sound,
As his eyes peered over me, a new recollection was found.
No words needed to be said, as in our eyes you see,
That his soul has found mine, the most important need.
The warmth was there, the longing in his eyes,
Never crossing boundaries, until  our wedding night.

Author notes

The best is sensual teasing, to ignite the other, yet courage to withhold temptation, to show affection with outthe need to have "sex" sometimes that gentle touch , soft words, mean more than the actual act.
* accrostic "The Art of Seduction" then short poem*

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  • Aodes
    May 31, 2007

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    Incredible

    An excellent write of sexual-sensual content. It teases but never goes beyond the bound. I sense alot of love and passion within, if only Life truly offers such pleasures you pen. (=

    I love how you preserved the chasity of your poem despites naughty words by concluding that, the couple "never crossed boundaries, until their wedding night".

    You write with much skill and emotions, and deliever well the finer things in Life. A talent, no less. I only wished there was more applause to give.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    This is wonderful. There is much you can do wintoput actually haiving sex. I prefer to wait and experience it fresh and new. Myy boyfriend is in no hurry either.


  • esroddo silver member
    May 30, 2007

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    That you did you painted a picture of seduction and so sensual. So tender soft and gentle love. All with great taste. (Lisa)
    "My lips began to move, but they made no sound,
    As his eyes peered over me, a new recollection was found.
    No words needed to be said, as in our eyes you see,
    That his soul has found mine, the most important need.
    The warmth was there, the longing in his eyes,
    Never crossing boundaries, until our wedding night."


  • individuality gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    maybe saying be known in that first line?
    passions mind - mind is belonging to passion so passion's mind

    at the end you change tense one minute you are saying he brushes my hair etc then my heart began my lips began - which is looking to past tense rather than the present you were in


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    May 29, 2007

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    Oh you are very gifted.. to be able to write with such passiona nd feeling. It is so nice to be able to feel the passion of your pen and have so many breath taking images painted within my mind as I read your masterpiece.

    I wish you the best of luck in the contest you entered. I am sure you will do very well in it


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 29, 2007
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      *hangs head in embarassment* your words have touched me. I thank you....
      ~Tory~

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