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A for Absoulute mess

these are supposed to be the days
when we get real Fxcked up.
but my friends are all too straightedge
and i don't wanna be the druggie one.

these are supposed to be the days
when we get stoned off our asses,
making out in hallways,
and skipping all our classes.

these are supposed to be the days
when we don't have to give a shit.
popping pills, and wild parties.
keep on going, hit after hit.

these are supposed to be the days
when we fight and get F's.
F for Fantastic, D for Delightful,
and A for Absoulute mess.

these are supposed to be the days
when we break out of our shell.
but i think i'm stuck inside mine.
anyone wanna help me out?!

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  • BAMFNx3
    August 21, 2007
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    I LOVE THIS AND THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL!


    stop reading my mind mandapoo, geeeeez =)


  • Raging Chaos
    June 23, 2007

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    awww! Amanda! its funny i feel the same way. But i am some what straight edge. i love the last verse. where you said that your stuck in your shell, i love that part because i can relate to it. i love this poem!


  • infernalxfidelity
    June 6, 2007

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    ok...i'm finally commenting this.

    i feel this way too. eveytime i get a good grade for my parents...or fight with them over a bad one...it feels fake. like i should sneak out my window, meet up with bad-asses in leather and chains and get high like fuck and have a wild time.

    but maybe we're all just too smart for that...

    or we all just haven't thought of it. maybe next year we'll smoke weed in the girls bathroom while we pretend to fix our tampons...

    <3julia


  • CapturedMoon
    May 30, 2007

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    OMG!
    Thank you.
    Thank you.
    Thank you.
    That's EXACTLY how I feel.
    My friends are pretty chill, but even they wimp out sometimes.
    I don't know, I just feel like we're all missing out on something better than good grades and perfect attendance.
    We're missing out on the experience.
    And that's not something I wanna pass up.
    Maybe you and I can find some stoner group and rule the school while hating it at the same time. =)

    ...Oh sweet dreams.


    "hese are supposed to be the days
    when we fight and get F's.
    F for Fantastic, D for Delightful,
    and A for Absoulute mess."
    That's my favorite part.
    Did you get the F for fantastic from me?
    'Cause I say that a LOT.