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Neither Star Nor Soldier

Neither star nor soldier falls to the ground
that God does not notice.
He promised us that his eye is always on the sparrow
and I know that he watches over this young man.
Sometimes we cannot be content to pretend to know why,
but we can be content that he is in Gods hands.
We cannot remember on Memorial Day only those that have gone
before, but rather to remember those that will still come after.
The heroes of 911, the soldiers that still march despite hardships
and lack of praise.
We can only bow our head and pray for this man who gave his
all, that we today have the freedom to be all that we can be.
Thank you Eric (Spence) Smallwood, the stars shine brighter as you are with them.

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My heart goes out to you and your family.

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  • davidwright silver member
    February 6, 2008
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    Very nice testiment to a fallen soul be he hero or unknown. Well done. Happy trails


  • MustangTommy
    January 24, 2008

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    Wonderful. THANK YOU! My sentiments exactly. Funny how we can not get over heartache, but so easily forget 911, sad really... Thank you for this poem.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    July 14, 2007
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    thank you very much for your entry into this contest for my cousin eric. i wish you well in the judging. viyanna rosemarie 2


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    July 14, 2007

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    thank you very much for the entry into this contest for my cousin Eric. i wish you well in the judging. viyanna rosemarie


  • Tabitha-Robin
    June 14, 2007
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    Great write my friend. Thanks so much.


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 12, 2007
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    God Bless Eric

    There are so many beautiful stars in heaven that shine for the valor and bravery of so many of our bravest and best. Your poem honors them and all they sacrificed for. A truly lovely poem. Your words are so heartfelt and touched my heart. Take care, Sandy


  • Inside and out
    June 4, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful poem. It is written with a tenderness that is heartwarming. Nicely done my friend. Good luck in the contest.


  • Wandika gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    Nice Judy.


  • They Say Shannon
    May 29, 2007
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    What a noble subject. :]


  • Twins 4 me
    May 29, 2007
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    What a beautiful tribute to a brave soul. God bless you for writing this.

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