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A Penny for your thought

Stirred emotion
Raw and clean
The pain I feel
When its set free.

My head aches strong
My body weak
A mindless thought
Its here for weeks.

Ting. Tang.
The bells are ringing
Hark.
Are those really angels singing?

Or is it
my imagination.
Created from
a mans wrong nation.

This raw emotion
Void of thought
Has set my mind
Its now distraught.

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  • candycoated cyanide
    May 29, 2007

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    Ting. Tang.
    The bells are ringing
    Hark.
    Are those really angels singing?

    I like that part.

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