Look out that window and what do you see?
Rain falling on rooftops
Trees swaying in the breeze
Dark clouds rolling in
Bright flashes lighting up the sky
Children running to their houses
Look into that window and what do you see?
People cozy in their beds
Water running in the bath
Lights turning on and off
Pictures hanging on the wall
Shapes of all sizes moving around
What do you see?
Point out the lines you liked and disliked
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Really good Imagery. Nice poem. I liked all the lines! yay. I like how you started with look out the window and then went to look in the window. Well written and awesome again
your cousin
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I like this piece expecially the line 'Bright flashes lighting up the sky'. That was my favorite part. I really like your written because you write imagery so well. I really like the form that it is in because it helps the imagery more then with just the words. Wonderful job keep it up.
Never give up
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This poem is great, the imagery of both inside and out is fantastic and presents an idea of sheltering from the outside world .... 'rain falling on rooftops' whilst 'People cozy in their beds'
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yey
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Good job ruth. I..well I will comment on your poems because you commented on mine. Good job.
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Very poingant piece filled with many life images and giving us a glimpse into important events...so very well expressed...smiles, Terry
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