Amazing Grace
when you're all gone
Faith's embrace
will melt at dawn.
The day does glitter
sparkle and shine
leaving you bitter
and wanting to whine.
Amazing Grace
I ask for power
From God in space
So I'll not cower.
Author notes
Wrote this while talking on the phone. Just felt the need to write something down in rhythm/rhyme. Not my best, but i like the gerenal message.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Have no clue at all what it was about, but very deep and sensual once you think about it. AND OMG IT RHYMED. <3 good job babe, keep it up.
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i liked it..
well yeah madison pretty much all my comments are the same on your poems.. i like it.. i like it.. i like it.. so pretty much yeah i liked it! lol it was short, and good to the point.. im not the best critique person or whatever ahh mosquitos are attacking me! ahh anyways better get going ttyl loves ya.. nice write keep it up
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god is an astronaut : )
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