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Glass Tears Verses Elusive Tear Drops(( Revised ))

Glass Tears Verses Elusive Tear Drops (( Revised ))

By: Julia Clark & Gerry Howard

 

 

 

She's an elegant dancer
exotic and sweet.
I cruised into her spot
suave and discreet.

Every movement of her body
gave me the chills.
As she modeled her treasures
with class and skill.

Even though I had never met her
it felt so intoxicating.
I was in awe of her beauty
and my heart was pulsating.

She smelled of wild orchids
under an enchanted moon.
The very thought of her
made me swoon.

Our eyes intersected at the
crossroads of fascination.
Words couldn't explain my
intense infatuation.

She felt my spirit as it soared.
Her provocative motion made me roar.

Time and eternity suspended
as I was transposed into the
galaxy of her world.
Stars effervesced the deep ebony sky
and my mind began to swirl.

Like radar my eyes penetrated her soul.
As glass tears fell from her eyes,
I watched her life unfold.

She was the igniting fire of my desire.
The passionate flames of her love
made me perspire.

I trembled as she licked her succulent
ruby red lips.
They were so moist and inviting
that I wanted a sip.

Her smile made my heart skip a beat.
I was caught in the web of her mystique.

Alas she was just an erotic illusion.
An aberrant yearning that caused
agony and confusion.

Her love was as fleeting as the wind.
A costly distraction in the paradise of sin.

Glass Tears:

You are an elusive love

and I have poured out

my first glass of tear drops,
I feel your motives,

and your tactics

and I see your blazingly hot.
I am a figment now,

so surrender your imagination.

The warrant for your capture has been signed

and ordered,

so enforce me.
Pour in the champagne of lust

and desires through the game of elusive anxiety,

at the end of the night

you will have the option of sparing my hunger

or untying me.
To that hot drink in your eyes,

this is a moment instilled so hypnotic.
You are that fellow type,

that shock my nerve waves.
The heat of your words,

scorching my flames of deceit.
The glass tears roll down my face screaming,

"He stops the pattern of my heart beats.”
It’s so neat,

the way you woo me off my feet,

and get me to dance to you.
Why are you doing,

what it is that you are doing,

to the sex appeal of me.
You have joined my eyes now

and we are both shedding a few glass tears,
The dress of heat drops now

and my nude brown skin is revealed.
Another beauty held within,

so cast your spell now.
Bring your elusive to the obvious.
I seek your passion

and taste every end

to your passionate,

Vigorous,

naughty.
Now,

your body appears

as a shadowed dream.
Is this happening,

I mean the real thing.
Your beautiful

and in every color you bring,

is so amazing.
Your luscious

and my brain has collapsed

to a repercussion.
Kiss me now

and let our bodies start doing the discussing,
The rapping’s of your touch,

they are warm and so sincere.
The tears are shedding,

Because I dig you

so extremely much,

my dear.
Do I have the guts to be that loose

inspired woman of your determined free,
My glass is full of love

and I am now down on my knees,
Giving all praises to you,

Your elusive love,

and I have poured in my second glass of tear drops.
My inner woman

has released a new game

of sensual g-spots,

so feel free.
To release,

what ever pressure you have

Let it rain all down on me.
Now lets escape,

The toast has ended but not our date.
I have been slapped,

by an elusive dream.
He left me,

this can’t be.
I am now,

sharing a champagne glass

with the hurt of my many left tears,
He will be back after the truth of storms

to chase our illusioned fears.

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© Julia L. Clark & Gerry D. Howard Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved






 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • New-n-Improved
    February 12, 2008

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    Worth It's Weight In Gold

    Love this poem. It is amazing and very interesting. You two have put together an excellent pieceof work. This is what I call poetry. You both prove to be great poets. Julia, you are phenomenal. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      February 12, 2008

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      Thanks honey so much for your faith in me as
      a writer and a great loyalty to me as i stated in the video to you guys my loyalty the love besides the wickness
      i went through i love you and love the ones who dont even love me i am no perpitrader and I am who i am
      The Red Cat Jazz of Love I think Gerry thank you as well
      Just watch the mail we will be in stores shortly just sent everything back to the production team today

      I Love You For Ever
      Julia


  • xxlisajazminexx
    September 17, 2007

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    amazing!

    This was incredable...... so sexual and raw ... I totally LOVED it.... the rhyme in the first few paragraphs were unbelieveable.... and the end was absulutely amazing!!! this definately deserved the gold trophy that it got... and if there was a platinum trophy... it would have got that one too!!!
    great write
    Much love jewels!!! (((hugzzzz)))


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      September 17, 2007
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      thanks babe i am surprise i won hell thanks congrads on your bronze to i shall read it


  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    September 4, 2007
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    this poem is so beautiful i have not a clue what to say as my words are not even worthy enough to even comment this was so amazing i like this piece you two artist write extremely well together and this title who came up with it. I can bet it was this pretty lady enthralling she is something


  • esroddo silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    Baby girl I loved it A master piece

    The first part really had my attention. I had to read it twice the rhyme is outstanding the concept of the write is screaming. You have out did your self sis. You are so amazing were the hell do you get all this from. Bravo Brave I love you so. (LISA)
    "Elusive Tear Drops:

    She's an elegant dancer
    exotic and sweet.
    I cruised into her spot
    suave and discreet.

    Every movement of her body
    gave me the chills.
    As she modeled her treasures
    with class and skill.

    Even though I had never met her
    it felt so intoxicating.
    I was in awe of her beauty
    and my heart was pulsating.

    She smelled of wild orchids
    under an enchanted moon.
    The very thought of her
    made me swoon."


  • kennethlaney
    July 3, 2007

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    Excellent !

    Only fault is it's a tad long. I've got to go for a bit. Will be back after I eat something. Is that you in the last poem that I read?
    "BOO"

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 3, 2007
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      Yes...

      the last part is mine its a callaboration with a person i love dearly Gerry Darell Howard. I hope you and I can Collab soon I Love You


  • Ephiphany
    June 19, 2007

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    WOW!!!!

    This is AMAZING! Girl this combination is on FIRE...


    You are an elusive love and I have poured out my first glass of tear drops,
    I feel your motives, and your tactics and I see your blazingly hot.
    I am a figment now, so surrender your imagination. The warrant for
    your capture has been signed and ordered, so enforce me.
    Pour in the champagne of lust and desire through the game of elusive anxiety, at the end of the night you will have the option of sparing my hunger or untying me.
    To that hot drink in your eyes, this is a moment instilled so hypnotic.

    FIRE & Fesire


  • MahoganyFlow
    June 19, 2007

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    She smelled of wild orchids
    under an enchanted moon....I was eluded by that line!
    I thought they both were wonderful poems. But I am more leaning towards Elusive Tear Drops as my fav. Mainly because some of the lines in glass tears had some strong lines but were not followed by another one like: Now, your body appears as a shadowed dream.
    Is this happening, I mean the real thing. The 1st line was strong to me but the 2nd line didn't quite follow...idk, I would have something around ummmm...."Pondering the reality of my fantasies, validated by your presence vagely seen....idk Just basically saying that I question if my fantasies are coming true...then it's comfirmed because the person is there but since the body appears to be shadowed, it is vague...But over all both poems were wonderful creating the imagery. I applaud both.


  • Griswold silver member
    June 19, 2007

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    Beautifully written and presented you two, a wonderful duo of poetry to share with a wanting crowd, good job indeed...Scott


  • Swan song gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    You are a beautifully sensual poet your poetry exudes desire. I loved this read and will be reading it again. You entrhall me!


  • OutsideTheMirror
    May 30, 2007

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    I like the description, but the rhyme is really predictable- crazy turn-off to me. I'd just watch them in the future rather than change this poem... maybe more slant rhyme and make sure you don't use the couples that "everyone" uses (fears/tears for example)

    I'd also incorporate the 2 poems together rather than have one, than the other. It would give a better feel for the storyline

    (sorry- I'm pretty harsh when it comes to comments)

    Hope I said something helpful!

    .:Marie:.


  • Blaque01
    May 30, 2007
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    Damn gurl this rocks....

  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 29, 2007
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    Crazy Darell I Love Him ....

    Julia I think it's brilliant!! You are so "FUCKING" talented!!
    This poem is off the freaking hook!! WOW BABY!! Damn!!

    I must tell you that there are some mispellings that need to be corrected. One or two phrases sounded a little off. If you will I would like to work with it alittle and send it back to you for approval.

    Also, I think this collaborative piece would be even more effective if my part went first and your part followed.

    let me know okay.
    Again, you're incredible!!!

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