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The real me

There aren't many girls like me
Intelligent, strong and unique
Give me a chance, you will see
That knowing me is a treat.

Dare you to let me in
Make me centre of your world
Discarding my love would be a sin
Come make me your only girl.

Rare, yet real as they come
You know my words aren't lies
Don't tell me our love is done
Don't be the one to make me cry.

Stare deeply into my eyes
It's my eyes that hold the key
Hopefully you'll finally realize
That there are few girls like me.

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  • The Cube
    June 2, 2007
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    Nice...seemed somewhat demanding in the begining though. lol. Good job on it anyways.


  • zhaniswolf
    May 29, 2007
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    this is very much you. great job.


  • honorable mention
    May 29, 2007
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    very strong words here. this is a real good one. good luck