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These Emotions

So many things to say and so little time,

Being torn in half is not what I want.

There's so much energy in and out,

What do I do?

Do I cry?

Do I hate?

Do I Love?

These Emotions

Have me confused.

 

Your there once,

But I turn around and I see nothing

But distance ahead of me.

Not sure what's going to happen

These Emotions

Are eating away at my brightend soul.

 

So lost now,

Not wanting to turn back

Feeling so Hopelessness, and discouragement

I sit there alone,

Wondering how I'm going to get through this.

You gave me all

These Emotions.

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Jess Option 1- My memories

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  • Delete this polease
    July 2, 2007

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    Emotions suck and we should ban them from the face of the earth!!! I know how you feel and I'm feeling that way to. Your poem is so relatable and honest. Brava Thanks for entering


  • JessTheRentyMess
    June 6, 2007

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    decent

    it seems a bit unfinished. it is a very good poem...yet it needs another stanza to kinda finish it off..no grammer or spelling mistakes that i could find..very good

    -Jess-


  • Candy-Coated-Love
    May 30, 2007
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    "you gave me all these emotions" is so true..i know how this feels..thnks for posting it.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 29, 2007

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    There's so much energy in and out,
    What do I do?
    Do I cry?
    Do I hate?
    Do I Love?
    These Emotions
    Have me confused.

    emotions do ake so much from us but they can also give so much back. thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie


  • Lets Get Tragic
    May 29, 2007
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    Beautiful! "You gave me all these emotions" -- I know exactly what you mean... since I've rolled all the way down the hill humans like to call "love", I understand completely what people go through, nd that line means so much to me. Good job and good luck!

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