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The fear I feel in my heart

I feel fear of losing some one
Because that fear will always be there
Till I give lose to that fear
It will go away when I learn to face that fear
But now that I faced my fear I will move on to a better life
And fear will never give me problems again

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 13, 2007

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    Facing ones fears is the first step to being whole:f Love the way you stood up to it:f:f:f wonderfully written*hug*

     

    love to My Little Wolf Brother:f

     

    your sister:f