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Lost Love

He's dead
She's dead
Two loved ones lost
Papa I loved you why did you leave
Annie my friend why did you leave
I feel so lost and alone
Trapped in a maze with no way out
In the dark with no flashlight
That gapping black hole in my heart
Tears oozing over my eyelids
Covering my face with sadness
Annie my best friend I miss you
Papa I love you
I wish to see their faces againg
One last time
I want to hear Papa laugh
See Annie smile
If in a dream but just one last time
Then and only then may my broken heart be repaired

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  • TheStupidLamb
    December 1, 2007

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    I'm sorry for your loss, but I specifically asked for no poems for the deceased in my contest description.