A life of many colors.
Hated by some, loved by others.
A paradise, for a rich man's eyes.
Lust is love in the eyes of lovers.
fake is real in place of mothers.
A violent life till earth's demise.
So what is your life?
Are you free?
Or are you empty,
just like me?
Empty,
Empty like me?
Faith is hell inside the churches.
The people just recite their verses.
The people live a holy lie.
Beautiful is the new disgusting.
homes are broken, hearts are busting.
We all stand by as children cry.
So what is your life?
Are you free?
Or are you empty,
just like me?
Empty,
Empty like me?
Author notes
I song i wrote about life...
A contest entry
- sadness and darkness and anything society dosent like. by Emo Cowboy14.
1200 points, ended June 8, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - contest!!! (no rules) by nobodys-girl.
1700 points, ended July 5, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Society, love, philosophy, music, emotion, etc... by CrazyRebel.
456 points, ended July 1, 2007, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
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This is life it would seem, unfortunately. But then there are the masks that the world portrays, hiding deeply, hiding away the reality of life itself. people refuse to see beneath the surface, refuse to realize what is really going on around them. And it's sad.
it is good that you can see this. That this is not a hidden world to your eyes. that life is not what the world makes it out to be. But there are also that parts of life that make it worth living.
very good job.great emotion, and feeling. -
Loved this write.
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wow i liked the repetition and purtiy in that write, honestly i could see you some day as one of those poets that everybody loves because the drugs from the past allowed them to think through emotions outlining the future and presence of a narrow uniqueness that brings out love from the grateful ones of talent.
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loved the melodics of this!
good luck in the Contest!
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The poem sure makes the power of the word "emptiness"
come alive. That rings out so nice and loud.
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wow...i can't say that i'm empty...but i can relate to most of this. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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wow. that was realy good. thatnks for entering and good luck.
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