No one has done the things I can do
The ways that I love to torement you
And you follow me like a slave filled with seduction
Silently awaiting the bitter destruction...
Now I slowly take the razorblades across your skin
Then sprinkle the open wounds with salt
The needle gows into your arm; oh the sweet sweet heorin
Sad but true that this is all your fault...
For you keep coming back.
Tonight as I lay by you in the candlefire
And pour the wax over your lips
You follow my every word
Just to have my intoxicating kiss...
How blind you are to give into your desire
As the flesh is being peeled from your bones
Tied up and screaming,
but you don't scream from the pain
your torment now is that I left you all alone.
Author notes
Hope this was good enough for your contest
A contest entry
- Darkness over takes you and me by ur worse nightmare.
450 points, ended May 31, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Brilliant I loved the imagery you created in this piece.
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Good enough it is fuckin brilliant i loved every word every phrase and it rhymed the first poem to rhyme it is brilliant and i love it. the imagery was perfect and the the story was brilliant. fabulous
all the best
nightmare xx
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you are fucked up. i'm glad i don't see you like this. lol. i wonder who this is for. is it the one who's ass i threatened to kick if he didn't leave you alone? lol. i love you my lesbian lover. tehe. i'll use the purple one tonight.
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