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Lost

My parents are gone
And siblings too.
There is naught
I can do.
All I have are
These pink shoes
To remind
Me of you.

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This is for picture #1. I hope you like it.

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  • FarFromFlawless
    August 5, 2007
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    Short and sweet=)


  • iamlost gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    Aww, this is sweet. I like the emotion and feeling in it, it's very poignant. Great poem, good luck in the contest!


  • squirrelgirl
    May 29, 2007
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    Maybe this should've been longer...