We were together for so long
It was all I ever knew
Like some kind of love song
What am I suppose to Do
You were my heart
Beating to Kepp me going
You tore me apart
Behind my back,me never knowing
Lying straight to my face
I thought you loved me
Clearly not the case
This now I see
So lost
why and how
who am I
What now
Please tell me what you think
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So sorry
I am so sorry if this is reality for you. Nothing I can say can make it better and no answers can tell you where the love is suppose to go now. I myself have been asked that before and i had no answer. This is a painful piece wrapped in beauty of is truth. it is easy to read and very well put together. like the capital letters you have throughout. Whether by accident or on purpose they guide me to the strongest parts of the write. Not big on grammer myself. it is the meat of the write and this is a side of beef.
thanks for sharing.
juffle1111
brian
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i feel an utter feeling of frustration and an overwhelming feeling of hurt and confusion in oneself here. You captivated the feeling of betrayal well here. nice job with the title, for when something like that happends, you can't help but to feel like..."what now???"
Rianna
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Dylon, This is so sad and still it is a beautiful piece. I feel the pain within and it crushes my heart. Betrayal is tough enough and from someone you love it's like an anvil sitting atop the heart and taking all the life out of it. Very well done here for the title. Thank you for sharing of yourself and your pen. I wish all the best for you. Never give up on love though, it is out there and the right one will come your way. Love and God bless, Joyce
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o i'm so sorry ... i know what it's like to loose someone you love .... and even to loose someone that didnt' even love you but i know it can be hard so if you need anything just give me a shout ... *gives you a hug* feel better
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i like it..it has a really good ryhming thing..
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