There he goes...
He walks slowly...
In the middle of the night...
He walks terrified...
Thinking of the moment...
Thinking of the life he had until this moment...
He walks a little more...
He looks behind him, to make sure noone is there...
Then he gets near the bridge...
There he starts thinking of the demons that keeps hunting him...
So there he is about to jump...
He starts to think of the most important thing that matters to him.
His little baby girl...
What would be like to her,if he left her like that.
So he is turning around.
Then he walks away.
Please tell me what you think
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nice
good ending..makes the weight of believing you know the outcome very ease to bare, in hindsight of course!
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intense
a very nice poem hun, i loved it - the whole feeling you get of not knowing what he'll do and the relief that he walks away....nice job! -
most beautiful
such a tail of rememberance of the important thing.
people love you and need your love.
fantastic
thanks for sharing this
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