God this world sucks
I hate it so much
The people in it
Everything....
People are so mean to others
Even though we have to deal with each other every day
They still feel the need
To be ignorant, rude jerks
They say stuff that shouldn't be said
They don't care about the consequences of their actions
Nobody cares anymore
But did they ever
If everyone cared
Why would the world be like it is today
Why would it be so hurtful, painful
To the point you just want to die
But of course
This is just my opinion, thoughts from my head
Just random babbling
Of a teenager, lost
Author notes
i'm a rambling girl
A contest entry
- Ramble On, My Friend! by zhaniswolf.
375 points, ended June 4, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Teenagers (Edited) by EatYourSunlight.
320 points, ended June 24, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good point, you got it across thats for sure. ramblings can be fun.
PEACE -
ramblings fun, and some pretty awesome poems have been born becasue of it! lalalalalalalalala la
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i agree with you and know exactly what you mean. good job getting your point across.
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thank you for adding that in your author's notes.
this ramble sounds very true and much like at school. good job and good luck in my contest. -
yes i agree with you 100% it might be because we go to the same school but people are a holes to everyone it's stupid and immature! great write you got the point across alright and i've flet the way you have many many times before! as always great write, keep it up like i know you will!
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i know i said no rules, but i rambled in my contest, too, and didn't change anything afterwords. check everything in capital letters and edit it please.
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