Whenever Im around you until this day,
What is the first thing you noticed are the words you say.
Not your legs, butt, figure, or even your smile,
When I look at you it's your eyes that make every second worth while.
So blue that they sparkle they are truly the loveliest eyes,
They could never be judgmental or full of lies.
When I'm with you I stare into them with all my open heart,
It's the one sure way of knowing we will never part.
The feeling i get from them is of warmth and kindness,
It could never be confused with anger or violence.
So next time i stare think it not because I'm just a guy,
Think of it that those eyes give me the strength as if i could fly.
Author notes
I love my baby soo much, and her eyes just take my breathe away every time i look deep down into them
A contest entry
- Express your feelings by Razor-Blade Romance.
313 points, ended June 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - who's your perfect girl?(guys only) by country-girl.
600 points, ended June 17, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awwwww, this was fantastic!!! i loved every minute of this. i've written several poems about eyes, particularly a guy's eyes, and it was really cool to see that you think the same way. thank you for entering!!
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This was awesome. I loved it. Wonderfully and beautifully done. She's lucky to have you. Good luck in the contest. God Bless!
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Very nice. I like this piece a lot !!
Lovely -
Awwww, how cute and sweet and adorable and kind and lovely! What a wonderfully affectionate(sp?) write. A beautiful tribute to the one you admire. Great job!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ the Rocker who lost all
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