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Make Him Stop!

I hate the way he makes me feel
He says I'm a worthless pig
Everyday he beats me down
And snaps me like a twig

Emotionally he bruises
Physically he scars
Mentally he abuses
'Til I start seeing stars

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This is somewhat personal, but not really. It's about my brother. He just says some things that hurt emotionally.

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  • Liquid memories
    June 27, 2007

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    QWell honey, you need to leave this person, for that is not love, if he makes you feel that way. and run fast.

  • Chief Callahan
    May 29, 2007

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    Abuse isn't good any way you look at it and it doesn't matter where it comes from. I think I was like your brother until I realize how much I would miss my sister if she was gone.

  • darrylblacksr
    May 29, 2007

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    This sounds very abusive, I think that maybe you should think about getting sometype of help to stop the abuse if this is what your going through. Other than that this write seems to be a call for help which I hope you receive soon...