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~*~*~*Nothing~*~Left*~*~*~

Black crows perch upon the razors edge
Forecasting the oncoming shadow
Twin sets of coal black eyes peer over the perilous ledge
To the suffering creatures below

The moon has taken reign from the sun
Moon glossed shadows flow like liquid
The cleansing of earth has begun
May he who watches over us forbid

Angry reddened flames replace serene blue waters
The peaceful blanket of the night
Seldom lifts, bringing with it slaughter
We have little to offer a fight

Molten feelings and degenerate minds
Run from the flaming tyrant
Through scorched flesh and the burnt eyes of the blind
Few remain aspirant

Tis life lived beginning hells reign
Reduced to a chain ridden body
Young and old alike are slain
This is what the fire embodies

You will never escape
As long as you live
From this land of torture and rape
The lord has nothing left to give

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  • whiterabbit.
    June 17, 2007

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    I love this. The imagery is wonderful as are the descriptions. The flow is beautiful. Wonderful poem.
    Oh, and in case you haven't noticed I changed my name from XyourperfectdrugX to SellYouBeautiful.


  • daddyskisses
    June 1, 2007

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    ive read this twice now... its about time i comment it huh? well like i say almost every other time, its not fair! your good and i suc... wat else is there to say..

    allie