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of silence

 

 

steeped in choking brambles

and mired wooded murk

 

she lost herself in deeper forest,

 

snagging sharper branches,

and teasing tearing thorns

to render flesh in dreary drip

of rust

 

yet sitting softly in surrender

of twisted twilight

 

shadowed mind

 

she sighed as ebon gently closed

around the blessed sound

 

of silence

 

 

 

 

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  • omega13
    June 4, 2007

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    and what a beautiful sound it is, even during the pain of tearing flesh

    you've found a new style of writing lately and I like it alot


  • Desire gold member
    May 29, 2007

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    Wow!

    Another Powerful piece that tugs at the Heartstrings
    Silence can stir much which it does now
    Thank You for sharing this one

    Best wishes to You in the contest!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • kaibab silver member
    May 29, 2007
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    Ah I have sighe dlike this...beautiful poem...