Divine, the moment touched by you,
held by the hands of love.
Caressed so softly from head to toe,
shadows cast from above.
Deep in the valley a garden blooms,
tempting you and teasing.
Hearts beat faster, adrenalin peaks,
from soft sighs so pleasing.
Your sugary kisses tastes so sweet,
as your velvet hands glide.
I tremble with anticipation.
inviting you inside.
A nibble hear and a nibble there,
succumbs to your allure.
Passionate lips so tantalizing,
making me beg for more.
Fulfilling me with new sensations,
of love and so much more.
You give me such a night of pleasure,
one like never before.
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'Moment Divine'....
your words/writes are beautiful...
so long ago these thoughts passed through my mind for someone...but time was not kind....or so it seems...but then my life is still as though it just begun...in some ways...yet the clouds are still somewhat heavy by times...
anyways;
enough said on my part again...
and thank you for the beautiful read again...
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Thank you.
Good morning Sandra, Your comment was lovely. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you.
You take care, SDandy
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super
WOW, just about all I can say on this one, wonderfully done.
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The warmth of your thoughts traveled so beautifully through your pen. Imagery and your passion embraces the reader with so much beauty. Each word of each line only takes the reader into a magical place.... then takes them even further.... to paradise.. all the images and the passion inwhich you created is just that special. Thank you so mch for sending me the link to your poem so I would not miss such a pasterpiece....
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That's so beautiful discribtion, very good imaginary.
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Beautiful
A beautifully sensual write Sandy
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adrenalin peaks...
Very sensual imagery!
Well written!
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Lovely Comment
Hello, Thank you for the nice comment. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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