I hide because I'm shy
In that place behind your eye
A contest entry
- Hit Me With Your Best Shot - One Liners Only(1) by 2lullabyhaven.
745 points, ended June 12, 2007, 76 entries
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And true love rears its head. Such a wonderful line full of pure imagery.
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this is a rhyming thought about imagination and thoughts of special friends, very nice...very well done...Best of luck to you in the judging...PK
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sweet and short
yet still lovely...
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Yes. I like this one. Succinct & powerful with Truth. Good luck in the contest, Poet. Wanda
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This is a great one-liner. So few words expressing such deep thought. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This was intriguing, a few words that share a deeper meaning that at first appearance! Wonderful work and my pleasure to read
~Tia
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Lovely take on when someone is shy...excellent one liner. I love thses kinda contests! Good luck!
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Lovely
Sweet, soft, simple. Excellent write. -
Great One-liner!!!!
This was lovely. A great one liner. No better place to hide then behind soft caring eyes. You take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy
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As soft as a feather. Just lovely.
Cris
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So much said in so few words shy of words yet bold of heart but must hide in the love of ones eye in order not to be hurt love this one as well "mate" thanks for sharing
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Ahhhhhhh, you don't need to hide at all. A nice little one liner.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
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A catchy little one here
Wow. Thanks for entering my contest.
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