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Angela



         

    And the feeling inside of myself,
        I said was alive.

    But joy is the fragrance of your touch,
        and those melodic wings of your flapping reality.

    Let us feel the steel of cold fire,
      your sword of blazing titants slams upon my chest.

    You sing to me a song of a web which I cannot escape,
      and a place for which you wish to leave me.

    I believe our thoughts entertwined,
      make up a dreadful connection.

    Let us let the curtains close,
      listening to the piano, we can finally fall asleep.

    Brilliance to brilliance, and ashes to ashes,
      all I really wanted was a simple smile.

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  • Sandygram silver member
    January 20

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    This was a beautiful love poem. So full of love and romance. I love these lines....

    You sing to me a song of a web which I cannot escape,
    and a place for which you wish to leave me.

    An excellent write and a pleasure to read. I hope you keep writing. Take care, Sandy