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Bled


 
 

    And you said the darkness was inside of me,
    but all that I asked you for was fate.

    A twisted smile was left alone inside a shadowy box,
      And it was the weapon of choice which was left there.

    I believe inside of myself there is a clue,
      it must be this rapid fear of discovery.

    For I am not as great as you,
      you must be better your fabric more solid.

    Or perhaps it is just that I am a curse,
      no matter what I am a picture in your mirror.

    So shatter it with all your might,
      and leave me, I love to bleed.

   

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  • straighttalker gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    awesome

    This poem does not rhyme, nor does it need to, because poetry is not about the "rules". This short poem is so full of mystery and palpable emotion - that it pierces my soul - and makes me "bleed" also. Don't ever forget that the musings of your soul, are only a mirror for the rest of us. Please keep writing, your poetry is needed by the world.