Extreme sensitivity shared with you
Who incarnates elegance and grace
In a world where soulfulness is
A priceless blessing bestowed
On weary hearts tired of
Combativity
Competition
Cruelty
And cold
Words
Your
Feline
Tenderness
Appeases my
Burdened restless mind
Through mellifluous chant
Of meowed mantras of peace
Melodious offerings which
Resonate within the deep abode
Of the receptive cavern of my heart
I surrender to the serenity
That harmonizing sound-waves wrapped in
Purring rhythm of earth’s soul-song
Create in love-thirsty cells
Nourishing my body
With youthful life-force
Reminding me
That you and
I are
One
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Very very nice. Perfect form. Best of luck in the contest. Three bunnies.
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This is truly a lovely dedication and the Etheree is a perfect form for it. Wonderful verbiage and great flow and meter. Well done, I see she loves it.
Love,
Amera ♥
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Thank you for sharing your talent
Oh my this is truly a talent, I just love this form and the words flow with such an ease the picture is perfect, I could only wish for as much peace and serenity as this poem reads, so beautiful, this contest is turning out to be the best of the best...thank you for this wonderful entry...
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Sister mine, this is a beauty of a write! Your alliteration is amazing and the verbiage is excellent (I may use some of those words
) blondone makes a good pussycat morph 
I knew once you put your pen to paper you'd create a masterpiece, this triple etheree is simply stunning and you should be very proud of it
Love you always,
Laura
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