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Prima Facie.




spear  with

your tongue the word that

undoes me.



quantify your prediction with calculations

from the sun

& make sure to use stiff, old instruments

callously past their due date.



gather evidence

record the letters

gather evidence

there are signs of exhaustion.



make sure to affix the label to

the finished product:



a tumor, not malignant

but one, a 

needless

infection

product of upbringing & biology.

full of spores &

ancient sores

lined pages on arm.



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  • Jettison
    May 31, 2007
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    I got done reading and realized I had my funeral face on... that one that is part happiness but mostly suffering...

    This was beautifully written, made it a little hard for me to breathe, gave me a funny feeling in my stomach. But I loved it because it was real and honest and left me wanting more. And, none at all. So many emotions. Wonderful work.