I've decided that dirtypretty isn't my thing; it doesn't impress me
Or anything. However, tarnishedpretty is pretty bloody amazing.
Crushed roses and needles are overplayed, it seems,
Space Cakes and wholesome apples, though?
Your words get into me,
Like a kiss my parents shouldn't see
[Passionate]
Your ideas ignite me,
Like a wee dram in my throat
[Burning]
Your essence inspires me,
Like a pencil, sharp and yellow
[Love]
Maybe I've become an actor,
But I think you live back stage.
Author notes
#3. [Less than ]. I'm so tired...
Razorblade kisses.
*shudders* I'd say goodnight, but I don't wanna sleep.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended June 2, 2007, 18 entries
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"Your words get into me,
Like a kiss my parents shouldn't see
[Passionate]"
" Maybe I've become an actor,
But I think you live back stage."
Oh Beautifully stunning, Darling!
This is unique and I love it.
Wonderful job! :] <3 -
Ohh, this is beautiful.
Really, I love it.
Especially the lines :
Like a kiss my parents shouldn't see
[Passionate]
I just love love -love- that.
Thank you for entering and good luck!! -
oooh im liking this.
i love the side words you put too; added this wonderful touch to it all.
good luck in the contest!
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