Pain is all I feel right now,
the pain of my broken heart.
I know my poems aren't this straight forward but honestly
I don't give a fuck.
I tried my hardest to earn what I wanted
but in the end it turned around
and I had to go back to where I started.
It makes it seem as if I have no other purpose
but to make you smile at my wink
and think that I'm just simply perfect.
And when I finally decide to give you my heart
It's just routine that I sit and watch as you tear it apart.
I know I'll get over it
you know I always do
but this is the last time
I will leave my heart with you.
I'll be okay, just give me some time
but I swear this is the last day
my heart will EVER see the sun shine.
It's not worth it anymore,
I just don't care.
My love isn't what anyone wants...
so just go fuck off somewhere...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very to the point and emotional. i liked how you conveyed your feelings in a powerful and easy to relate to way. this had a nice flow, and even the naughty words seemed to fit OK within the piece. thanks for the entry and good luck.
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Ah. Straightforward and very heartfelt. My favorite type of poetry. I loved this. I can relate. Great job.
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