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bipolar cups of coffee

Bipolar  cups of coffee at the stroke of twelve,
insomniac episodes of waking nightmares.
Eyes of blur, twisted tormented fate,
schizophrenic burdened affairs.

 

Two scoops of depression,

1 drop of suicidal antidotes. 

One raging ranting poem,

one twisted song rewrote.

 

Split second personalities,

interchangeable life styles.

Aggravating break downs,

tick tock trials.

 

Breaking emotions,

ravening mad.

Terrifying  abnormality,

excruciatingly sad.

 

Combative happiness,

instantaneous joy.

Momentarily sane,

inject to annoy.

 

Sickening glee,

overwhelming roseate.

Loving today, loving him,

my heart stops a moment to beat.

 

Just another bi polar cup of coffee 

 

Author notes

Late at night can't sleep. And just a little insight at what it feels like to be bipolar.
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  • the mask
    October 24
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    this is exactly how i feel
    AMAZING JOB!!

  • Paige1989
    June 11, 2007

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    Great!

    I suffer from bipolar as well and that captures it so wonderfully! There's no easy answeer to that disorder. >.> But hopefully in the future, things will get better...not having to take meds, but finding a cure. Good luck to you,

    Paige


  • animated lies
    May 30, 2007

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    I enjoyed the vocabulary in such a short poem. I had a friend who was bipolar and when they came over they never slept-- so I can relate to this in a way.

    Good luck.
    animated ♥


  • Heartbeatsxfading
    May 29, 2007

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    Very good

    At first I figured this was only about how funny it would be to see a bipolar cup of coffee or something but it's different and I really liked it!
    Good luck!
    ♥ Surrender ♥


  • coffeeangel316
    May 28, 2007

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    This is a very good description when I first saw the title I thought it was about coffee, my favorite drink but I now know my mistake but it is a very good write.

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