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Break And Quake

A broken heart
A shaken start
A life to live
A slight motive

I condemn thee
To misery
To life without
A plan thought out

You break and quake
You hurt and shake
But you'd never know
'Cause you never show.

Author notes

I'm not sure, the title inspired me. =)

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  • Aquamarine.
    May 28, 2007
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    fantasticly wowish awesome


  • Forgot2Breathe
    May 28, 2007

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    Thsi is beautiful, and i love the way the title goes with the poem. Good Luck!!!! (dont worry we all break and quake)