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A Rainy Day

It's a Rainy Day,
and the worst
has yet to come.

Sitting by the
window waiting
for you.

Listening to
the rain as
it falls heavly.

It's a Rainy Day,
the storms are
getting nastier.

Watching the
clouds turn
green from above.

Tears run down
my face, like
dropplets on the window.

It's a Rainy Day,
the worst
has yet to come.

Author notes

It was raining and my bf is hurting me so i thought of this on top of my head "think on ur feet" and if it sucks im sorry

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  • q11wwww
    January 1, 2008
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    I hate rainy days.

  • Liquid memories
    May 29, 2007

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    so sorry for you

    Your bf can only hurt you if you let him. Do not be a door mat for his actions, as you have a life as well. I hope you feel better soon.


    • Stevie17Marie
      July 6, 2007
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      wat really got worse after i wrote this he got another girl pregnant

      • Liquid memories
        July 6, 2007
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        It shows what a jerk he really is. Though it may hurt, at least you are rid of him, as you could have gotten PG and he left you for someone else.Sorry about your pain, buit I say good riddance.


  • Candy6
    May 28, 2007
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    A great write

  • Alyssajane
    May 28, 2007
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    very nice poem

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