Sweetheart [come closer] this is u.r.g.e.n.t
this d i l e m a
this c a t a s t r o p h e
=
((come .closer. come .closer.)) Willie|Wonka|does|it|better|than|you|could|ever|dream|of|darling
&& as my lips are )pressed( close
just know that i know-----oh yes I know
that
I
deserve
better [maybe]
than this ♥·bumper·car·romance·♥
babe, lets just get to the point;;;
·I cut to the very deepest
·&& what I found was y o u,
·neon socks && -kinda- greenish eyes
·sexxxxxy hair && toilet seats
(((crouched over with that toothbrush
dancing along side those .gorgeous. tonsils)))
Babe,
I fell in love [in.lust] with you
with your
*sweet talk
*gentle hands
*and that sexy smile
"touch me now && you'll thank me later, doll"
ugh
But now, Love
I
*inhale*
hate
*exhale*
you
I don't [can't, shouldn't, have to] watch
as you (link) pinkies
*sweet talk*
*smile*
&& completley forget me [your always && forever]
with that
cheap [gorgeous]
trick
((if she had a slogan,
i swear it would be
so damn easy, a caveman could do me!!!
but i think that its pretty much known by now))
was i wrong to believe
that what we had wasn't just your ordinary bang???
[bare naked && sedated
"babe, I didn't bring a rubber"]
was I wrong
to think of you as my future?
[just breathe, babe,
&& I'll collide]
&& now your not even here
to
watch
me
fall
·oh.so.sweetly·
out of love with you
(((but its okay, you see,
because the whole time you were fucking her,
i was just doing it [your best friend] to feel complete [maybe])))
Author notes
I'll be your bathroom stall love affair, darling...
or theres always shattered mirror memory..
but only if you'll be my pretty pretty hate machine ^.^
A contest entry
- Calling All Dirty Pretty Dollies- I Need An Ap Family by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended August 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this poem
My favorite lines were:
"than this ♥·bumper·car·romance·♥
babe, lets just get to the point;;;
·I cut to the very deepest
·&& what I found was y o u,
·neon socks && -kinda- greenish eyes
·sexxxxxy hair && toilet seats
(((crouched over with that toothbrush
dancing along side those .gorgeous. tonsils)))"
You wow me in all the right ways-
I would love to be your pretty pretty hate machine♥
and you can be my bathroom-stall love affair ofcourse
But what's your screen name? -
this is a very interesting piece...but its not bad...not bad at all...keep writing
xXsewn2getherXx
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Whoa... -is in awe-
I hope this isn't based off of a personal experience.
But it's beautiful all the same
&& I was almost in tears reading it. [I'm in one of those moods].
Anyway, great piece and congrats on the honorable mention.
♥
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Good job with this sweetheart
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oh my godddd. bbyyy you totally just wrote how i pretty much feel about my ex in like all the ways that i never could, am to scared to, so many different things, i am like amazed right now. wowww.
Willie|Wonka|does|it|better|than|you|could|ever|dream|of|darling
somehow i just found that really entertaining. it was the first thing i noticed. but honestly all the lines about the other girl and just goddd. this is so going in my favorites.
i havent related to a poem like this in forever.
♥
coley
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Wow, I love this babe. Its amazing, I felt the same way. This is just amazing. The flow the wording the style= perfection.
I started copying my favorite lines but then the whole poem was basically posted again so I didn't hehe.
was I wrong
to think of you as my future?
[just breathe, babe,
&& I'll collide]
&& now your not even here
to
watch
me
fall
·oh.so.sweetly·
out of love with you
This is what I can relate to the most. This is just wonderful and I am in love with it. Great job sweetie and good luck in the contest.
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