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To Not Exist

                                to not exist
                        to not be able to feel
                  to not be capable of dreams
          to be completely gone from this world
to not remember who I am or to see where I may go
          not to be dead, but to not exist
              to be just skin and bones
                  dried up muscles
                    a used body
                     
                    a brain that does not think, a hear that does not beat
                                    is not what scares me
                                            it is to have a soul that cannot feel
                                                    to not be an seperate individual
                                                              to not exist

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  • forget my memories
    May 29, 2007

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    I like the lay out i think. Im not sure.. hmm. I think i do its different and thats good. I love the flow of this write though. Everything does fit together nicely and thats very important. Thank you for entering my contest it will be juged by the end of the day.

  • Looking
    May 28, 2007
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    don't really beleive this, just used to scare me. now i know the truth.