A letter to the person who ruined my life,
dearest mother,
you brought me down
you tore my heart open,
you let me gag on my exsistence.
You have never loved me,
You destroyed every chance of my life succeeding
I appreciate you, i love you
I thank you for your mistakes,
U gave me the chance to see.
I have the chance to live, even
if I'm not near you.
You abused me as your daughter,
yet i thank you, i love you,
Your anger let me be stronger,
you broke me down,
but my loving father cared,
he gave me the life i needed,
he gave me everything u couldn't
he gave me the thing you never will
he gave me his love,
he loved me, appreciated ne
and for this i thank him , love him
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Option three
A contest entry
- Options!! by forget my memories.
550 points, ended May 29, 2007, 19 entries
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This is good. I like that it is positive
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how refreshing to see someone actually use adversity to their advantage. I congratulate you on your feelings toward your mother. you have suffered and climbed above and this is not done enough in this world. too many say "poor me, feel sorry for me" thank you for sharing this with us. (and by the way, i love pineapple!)
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hey thanks for your comment
you know i think overall its always good to write things negatively and positively. Thank you for taking the time to read it it is very much appreciated!! !
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aww *hugs* this was great im speachless
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I like this its sort of how i feel about my dad me and my dad do not talk after how he treated me but i also dont live my my mom so i think in a sence i really really like the whole message you are sending i think when you go threw a hard family life or something like that everything in the end will eather break you or make you strong and with me and as well as you itmade us stronger great poem. Thank you for entering my contest it will be juged by the end of today i only have like 5 more poems to read Thank you again for entering.
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this is beautiful, the way you executed this was amazing it is raw and tells off a hard life but with such a positive undertone. Scince I have a realationship with my father that I think is similer to your mums I hear sister!
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