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Flavored Cigarettes && L-U-S-T

Shhh don’t speak doll
words that could bre/ak
this pretty little dream
a glamorous intoxication

Inject the deception
with cocaine lips to kill
Pink stilettos
distorted needles of perfection

Horrid weather
for a game like this
(But baby, you always win)

Her smeared lipstick
a true hero’s synthetic prize
flavored cigarettes && lust
(it’s what you live for)

Obscene flesh
&& cocktail narcotics
glisten in the kiss of hysteria

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 8, 2007

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    Beautiful lies eh... i'm fed a lot of them. The truth is harder to hear than lies, so give me some beautiful lies. Yeah, lust is a big part of the world today and so is dishonesty, have to learn to be who we are with a shield up for protection from the rest of the world.


  • erininthesky
    May 30, 2007

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    I love the last three lines of this poem... it's a great write... Keep up the great work! ♥ Erin