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Here It Comes There It Goes

I sit here and think to myself
As I pop another pill
Thinken of the days go by
That don't even seem real
So I pop another
In hopes that it goes away
Here it comes there it goes
I live this way everyday

Author notes

One of my friends penned this down, said he wanted to on my account. I hold absoloutely no control over this poem, but I can say it hits home more closer than anyone besides, him, I, and another friend of mine.

Personally, I think it's genius. I gotta get this guy on this site, but, you know how some people are, right?

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  • WorstNinjaEver
    May 29, 2007

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    It was pretty good. J probably wrote it, right? Unless, it was your other friend. It's pretty damn good. Cool idea.

  • katroshol
    May 28, 2007
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    A'ight. You crazy bois.

  • marmel
    May 28, 2007
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    Nice.

    Good rhyming, better meaning. Comment on my poem please.