Dresses are important to me, feminine occasion mother or not, complete
on-off shoulder rah-rah-rah before-during-after breastfeeding
an African woman gave me such relief, not just Latin comfort
as year long look finally found nursing true to no more shopping either
so my modifying by poverty had pointed a very best beauty, not simply in head
Author notes
please don't use good luck
leave no more than words in comment, please
anonymous contest, so don't use my name and replies are later.
*might try to edit parts but not title!
i.e. link...
e.g. enpowered not by departments merely, versatily
having more useful than just what's a part of the closet --
empire waist too to emphasize pregnancy ease if need be
I couldn't get best pic including that, though there is this :
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q97/photopoverty/6a43_1_b.jpg
or
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q97/photopoverty/70sbluegauzedress2.jpg
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2lullabyhaven, thank you for wanting a better idea of it.
I did trim it to exactly 5 lines, I apologize I didn't notice it went over.
I want to wait for more improvement if still necessary until explanation pops up through activity etcetera basing it so I don't botch it worse with just speaking...
for instance, I can present compact concept shorter but not as satisfyingly to me as it's not just set to cute
suitcase attitude with uterus
silk-like warm cool coiled in idea
of dressing for forecast of family
on-off shoulder is woman without another store
much, empire waist isn't about money pockets
thrill of title stays
A contest entry
- I Want Your Lifes' Motto In Five Lines Or Less by 2lullabyhaven.
600 points, ended June 10, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
poncho is the period
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Wow
If you wouldn't mind just a little more of a breakdown
so I can make a decision. Or not. Thanks for the entry
into my first contest.
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