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Love and Weather

     
If love is like the weather
Sometimes love is just like the rain.
You hear the rain falling in the night and you know it rained ,
When you wake up and  see a bird splashing in a puddle on the ground
and this is a sign that love will stay with you.
so if you have love when you wake up ,You will have someone.

Sometimes love is like the snow. It comes down so lightly,
you can't hear it. But snow leaves the ground pure and white.
All love should be like snow because it makes the world beautiful.

Sometimes love is just like the wind because when it is blowing,
You do not want it to break anything and it is blowing 
And the wind never drifts to the ground so you never see it.
So when you wake up and find no love, someone breaks your heart.
Also love is like the wind ,
You never know when the wind will be blowing in your direction
the wind is blowing,  It can come again and there will be no harm
so you will feel love all around you.

Sometimes love is like thunder and lightning with a loud noise
and the sight of powerful light which has wicked action and force.
Since love hurts when you think someone does not love you.
Also thunder and lightning does not stay a long time.
After there is only rain which is calm just like peace.
Since it brings peace in the end there is no separation
because someone will always love you.

Love is like the weather because you do not know
which is better or worse.
Weather is like love because it changes at anytime
we just take it as it comes.
Real love always stays forever in all kinds of weather.



Author notes

this was written in free verse like a song about love
I wrote it after I heard the song Latitude by Elton John this poem is on my computer three times feel free to search it,

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  • RealitysAStory
    March 26
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    One of my favorites, shhh don't tell! Good luck.


  • Dreams27
    May 29, 2007

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    aww, this is a lovely poem! very beautifully written with such a true message behind!! thank you for entering this piece! i enjoyed reading!! xxxx


    • Violinstrings silver member
      May 29, 2007
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      thanks!!

      I am glad you read it. and enjoyed it.
      I will read more of your poetry too.