My Father was a fighter who was full of laughter,
He never knew a stranger at least not talking after,
He would always love to talk, watch T.V. & fish,
Going to be with the Lord was his last & final wish.
Megan was very quiet until you got to know her,
You didn’t want to make her mad that I know for sure,
But she had such a wonderful spirit that touched everyone she knew,
She was always around & made you smile even when you were blue.
Vicki was the bestest friend I ever had & She will always be,
She could always make things easier & make you always see…
That no matter how dark things may get the light will always shine through,
And she always had that wonderful spirit & made you feel special too.
My Oldest Brother Danny died in the Vietnam War in 1969,
Although I never knew him I want his memory to always shine,
For He was a Hero, An Army Solider that fought for us,
Danny was all so full of love, honor, courage & trust.
These, My Friends, Are My Four Angels that have gone to a better place,
I am living on with their memory that nothing or nobody can replace,
Love, Faith, Hope, & Happiness is what all they have given to me,
The least I can do is return their priceless gift & share my love to thee.
Author notes
***My Assignment from YesYouCan... I hope you like the poem I have written about my four Angels. Please My AP Friends tell me what you think these are about my four angels that I love deeply that have gone to be with the Lord.
Written August 3rd, 2003
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WOW! that was a lovely tribute you can clearly see how much these people mean to you and the love you hold for them!
This is definately a tearful one but excellent!
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AWESOME POEM GIRL!
WAY TO GO SARA!!! This was such a great poem to your angels! I love that you expressed your love for them but at the same time it was a very uplifting poem. I am so proud of you! Keep up this marvelous work, for you are truly an inspiration to all of us. Mary Anne
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ur poems make me wana cry
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That's such a wonderful poem, It describes why you think those people are special and why they mean soo much to you.That was a very beautiful poem. I know how you must be feeling to lose all those people that means sooo must to you. It's very sad to lose someone who was very special.
Great poem I trully enjoyes reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Chantal
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They sound like such amazing people, thank you for sharing this write - you really are a true inspirtation, so thank you.
Much love to you and well done on this beautiful write.
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EXCELLENT, FIVE STAR ***** TRIPLE A+++
SARA DAWN!!!!
I LOVE THIS POEM. IT IS LIKE A PRAYER. IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU ARE A VERY CHRISTIAN PERSON AND COME FROM A VERY RELIGIOUS FAMILY. WHAT A LOVELY, LOVELY CELEBRATION OF YOUR DAD, MEGAN, VICKI AND DANNY. THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM. AND THE LITTLE HEARTS. IT JUST MAKES ME CRY HAPPY TEARS FOR YOUR FOUR ANGELS BECAUSE IT IS SUCH A WONDERFFUL TRIBUTE TO YOUR FOUR ANGELS. IT IS LIKE THEY HAVE ALL BEEN REMOVED FROM THE DEPTHS OF SORROW INTO THE BRILLIANT LIGHT OF THE LORD FOR ALL TO SEE WHAT MADE EACH OF THEM SO SPECIAL TO THIS WORLD. MY DAD LIKED TO FISH TOO AND HE WAS LIKE YOUR DAD AND HIS DAD HAS A MEMORIAL "REMEMBER ME AS A FRIEND TO ALL MEN". READING YOUR POEM WAS LIKE OPENING THE DOORS TO HEAVEN AND REALLY, REALLY UPLIFTED MY SPIRITS AND HAS BROUGHT MANY FOND MEMORIES OF MY LOVED ONES FORWARD THAT I NEVER WANT TO FORGET AND WILL ALWAYS TREASURE. THANK YOU SARA DAWN FOR WHEN YOU SHARED YOUR FOUR ANGELS I GOT TO SEE A GLIMPSE OF MINE TOO. GODSPEED AND BEST WISHES CYBER DAUGHTER. ALICE
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GOoD StUff*
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VERY SWEET. I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO LOSE LOVE ONES I LOST SOME MYSELF ADN I WILL NEVER FORGET THEM. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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this is a very beautiful tribute to your loved ones,i too have lost many family and friends,you don't realize how much you miss them till they're gone.this is a very beautiful poem,thank you
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Awesome
that was soooo nice!!! its about time we hear a true awesome story!! i bet if u were a singer u could make that into a song!!! i am really sorry they died! but it made u a great poet!!! good job i loved it . thats probably the best one i've read soo far!! give yourself lots of credit this is the first time i'll be giving someone points for their poem!!! -
Oh my gosh, that is so deep and touching. I have had people die and they all ment the world to me so I know how you feel... thank you for the input on my poem "It's just me" and I think that yours is a heart filled piece..great job.
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Really good
This is very well done. It makes me wish I could have known these people. It is sad that people must die but I am glad you keep the memories alive -
That is a beautiful tribute to your loved ones. Thank you for sharing that one.
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