You attacked me at my
most vulnerable state,
intentionally cut out
the life from me, your
knife plunging in, blood
flushed with pain oozes,
its presence prominent.
Betrayal is an
understatement.
Although I gave you all I
could offer, you could not
return the generosity.
I poured my heart out,
but I guess you didn't care.
But amidst all the sorrow
and anger I carry within,
I can't help but smile as
I glue the fragments
of my heart back to one,
for even though my soul is
pure, revenge is much,
much sweeter...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great emotional write. Nice imagery and flow. Thanks for sharing this
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revenge is sweet... haha
great poem you wrote here = D -
yes, i agree revenge is pretty sweet =]
greatt imagery! <3
~ktb



