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Peaceful Afternoon

The stillness - moving,
The gold silence - deafening.
A dream, I'm assured.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    The stillness - moving,
    The gold silence - deafening.
    A dream, I'm assured.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. Are you really sure that it is a dream?


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    Intersting haiku you have penned here - quite a peaceful afternoon for sure. Thanks for commenting on my poetry earlier.


  • eveningthought
    May 28, 2007

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    I like it, it's really short and simple, but you still get a great sense of something. It's mucho pretty too which helps. For a very little poem 'tis immense!